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©2009 ~persimmon
:iconpersimmon:

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BYE-BYE BOOK. WAVE TO THE BOOK GUYS

(no we haven't seen the last of it :D)

Not so sure about the layout here...how does it work? readable or awkward? also bird's eye views are a pain. I can never quite figure them out meh

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*adriana7 May 29, 2009, 7:27:33 PM
I think it reads just fine! :)
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~Ziriuel May 29, 2009, 8:22:47 PM
It's a nice set up. ^-^

*poke pokes* >.>

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...Insert interesting Signature here...

My adoptables:
[link]
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:iconjdcunard:
~jdcunard May 29, 2009, 9:35:51 PM
So is that the famous Alexandre Library? Cool! This adventure is just starting! (Kinda like a fantasy indiana jones adventure!) :love:

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GunSlinger by Day, Ninja by Night, Sweet Lover in between
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~bootheel May 30, 2009, 12:58:41 PM
I think it reads pretty well. I really like the sense of loneliness that perspective shot in the first panel gives, and then the unusual angle on the last panel.

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--Leslie
Two-Bit Jeremiah in Chuck Taylors
Sketchblog
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~firepixie May 30, 2009, 7:56:16 PM
I think the perspective is interesting. Some birds eye views aren't completely horizontal; the curve of the eye ball makes the line of vision curve as well. This is true for most animals so it works well. :nod:

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I gaze out the window at the freshly fallen snow while taking a sip of coffee. A small smile forms slowly on my lips and then I sigh.

"...This coffee is cold and stale again."
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~raybies May 31, 2009, 3:21:05 PM
buwahahaha... a book return slot in the library of alexandria!? You're soo whacky! Love it! --Ray

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I'm not slow; I'm special.
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~persimmon May 31, 2009, 5:08:24 PM
thank ya ^___^ I am pleased to hear it!

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And it's all for me grog
Me jolly, jolly grog
It's all for me beer and tobacco
Oh I spent all me tin on the ladies drinkin' gin
Be sailin' in the mornin' when the wind blows

:pirate: :skull: :ahoy: :skullbones:
:iconpersimmon:
~persimmon May 31, 2009, 5:09:13 PM
*is poked* :B yes ma'am! thank you

(I actually pinned down a really good face for your guy dude the other day but still gotta work on him some more :D)

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And it's all for me grog
Me jolly, jolly grog
It's all for me beer and tobacco
Oh I spent all me tin on the ladies drinkin' gin
Be sailin' in the mornin' when the wind blows

:pirate: :skull: :ahoy: :skullbones:
:iconpersimmon:
~persimmon May 31, 2009, 5:15:27 PM
Pretty much! Oh yeah and Indiana Jones is right on the mark, incidentally ;D you'll see

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And it's all for me grog
Me jolly, jolly grog
It's all for me beer and tobacco
Oh I spent all me tin on the ladies drinkin' gin
Be sailin' in the mornin' when the wind blows

:pirate: :skull: :ahoy: :skullbones:
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